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Old 26-May-2004, 21:19
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Default Re: Need help immediately. Does this sentence make sense? Pl

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Originally Posted by tired_me
For this interview, I have chosen my mother because she is responsible for making important decisions in my family.

Does this sentence make sense? And is there anything I should change? Any grammar mistake? this sentence is part of this paragraph:
On May 16th, 2001, Gordon Campbell became British Columbia’s first Liberal premier in over half a century. He was elected by many people because of his promises to improve our province. However, Mr Campbell has often made the wrong decision on numerous issues that have affected a diverse group of individuals. For this interview, I have chosen my mother because she is responsible for making important decisions in my family.
I'm afraid that I have to agree with my colleague TDOL. Are we missing the bigger picture? :?
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