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Old 17-Mar-2008, 15:38
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Default Re: Essay (please check)

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Originally Posted by Tvita View Post
It is obvious that advertising helps businessES GROW by ENCOURAGING consumers TO buy A particular brand or TO CHOOSE THE services of A PARTICULAR COMPANY.

What about "to buy" and "to choose" is it necessary to put "to" before them?

You can say: 'by encouraging customers to buy a particular brand or choose the services of a particular company'.

In the second case (choose) the 'to' is understood and not absolutely necessary. Normally, as you know, you encourage someone 'to' do something. Again, it is a question of style. I believe I chose 'to' twice, to aid the reader put emphasis in the right place. It was a long sentence, after all.
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