Thread: Company prepared to be sold- Please, proofread the text.
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Old 19-Mar-2008, 20:07
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Default Re: Company prepared to be sold- Please, proofread the text.
Analysts can’t exclude that doing so shareholders may getting ready the company to be sold.

Seems very akward . . . "can't exclude"?

How about

According to Analysts, the change may indicate the company is positioning itself to be sold.
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