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Old 19-Mar-2008, 20:10
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Default Re: Could anybody kindly proofread and give me some ideas on my poem and my short ess

Hi, RedMtl
Thank you very much for your valuable advice, I would love to have you help me with my usage of words. However, is it possible for you to give me some ideas on choosing appropriate words? (sorry that i cannot send u private msg since i'm new here and i need to have at least 10 posts before I use this feature.) I'm eager to learn English.... thanks...
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