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 Re: Could you please check my another essay
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Originally Posted by Tvita 
Childhood is an initial period of life when people begin to learn and understand the world which surrounded them. Therefore, it is very important that parents organise the time of their children right. Some of them treat their children as adults and restrict children’s free time too much, insisting that this time should be used to do more school work. However, I strongly believe that outdoor activities as much important as school education.
| Childhood is an initial period of life when people begin to understand the world surrounding them. Therefore, it is very important that parents organise the time of their children the right way. Some of them treat their children as adults and restrict their children’s free time too much, insisting that this time should be used to do school work. However, I strongly believe that outdoor activities are as important as formal education.
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