Thread: Company prepared to be sold- Please, proofread the text.
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Old 21-Mar-2008, 12:34
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Default Re: Company prepared to be sold- Please, proofread the text.
Your sentences are clear.
Keep the word shareholders in sentence 2.
"Shareholder" is not necessary in sentence 3.
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