21-Mar-2008, 13:03
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 Re: Please, would you proofread my text
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Originally Posted by Bassim 
If a foreigner arrived to Sweden a Friday afternoon and took a stroll in an ordinary Swedish town, he or she would see a strange phenomenon; men and women, young and old, upper classes and lower classes, university professors and manual workers, beauties and plains, fat and slim, everyone is carrying a blue plastic bag. | If a foreigner arrived in Sweden on a Friday afternoon and took a stroll in an ordinary Swedish town he or she would see a strange phenomenon: men and women, young and old, upper classes and lower classes, beauties and plain Janes, fat people and skinny people--everyone is carrying a blue plastic bag.
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Originally Posted by Bassim The foreigner could only try to guess the contents of a bag because it is not big enough too give a sufficient place for food and other goods one can buy at the shopping mall and it is probably too big to contain medicine. | The foreigner could only guess at the contents of the bag.
Although the bag could be too small to hold much food, I don't see how it could be too big to contain medicine.   |