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 Re: Please, would you proofread my text
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Originally Posted by Bassim  If he decided to enter the shop he would notice a certain feeling of expectation on the faces of the shoppers. Almost the eagerness and enthusiasm to pay for the bottles and return home. He would also notice that prices are very high, one of the highest in Europe, but despite that he would watch people grabbing bottles of Vodka, French, Italian, Spanish and Australian wine, English and German beer and other drinks. putting them in a shopping trolley where they would make a pile as big as a small pyramid. | If he decided to enter the shop he would notice a certain feeling of expectation on the faces of the shoppers. He would be able to read on their faces the eagerness to pay for their purcheses and return home. He would also notice that the prices are very high, some of the highest in Europe, but despite that he would see people grabbing bottles of vodka, French, Italian, Spanish and Australian wine, English and German beer and other drinks.
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