Hello, I hope it's okay to modify the letter, but not because it was not good enough. I've thougt it would be fine to start differently with the sentences in order to avoid repetitions.
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Originally Posted by Anglika  Dear Sir/Madam
I am a second year student on a Fine Arts course in Switzerland, at [name of institution], and am interested in transferring to [name of institution] to complete my Bachelor's course.
Before I apply to you for the third year or even your second year courses, I would like to be certain that (if instead of that?) it's possible. Despite the Bologna agreement, I have heard that my credits will not always be recognized in all art schools.
I would be grateful if you could inform me about that.
I enclose a copy of my ECTS credits and a detailed account of my educational background.
Enclosed you find a copy of ...
If you need more information, please do not hesitate to contact me.
Please do not ... , if you ....
I look forward to hearing from you.
Thanks in advance for your attention to this matter.
yours faithfully
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You shouldn't forget to say thanks.
