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Old 24-Mar-2008, 10:30
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Default Re: please have a look on my letter
Welcome to the forums. There are some errors indicated:

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Originally Posted by pariya View Post
hi
I think you would better to write your letter in this way:

Dear Nicole,

I have applied recently for the position of Data Officer at [..]. I sucsessfully successfully went through an interview and received the documents to complete my application process but unfortunately I had to go to the USA (due to the winning a 'Green Card'). I had to stay in the USA for a few months but now my paperwork is done and I have just come back permanently to the UK. Therefore, I am wondering if there is still a chance for the position that the position I applied for is still available. If so, I would like to ask you to consider me once again as a candidate. Please do not hesitate to contact me on 0999999.

Yours sincerely,

Emma Xxx
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