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Old 26-Mar-2008, 01:00
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Default Re: solving the problem of (technical writing)
Development and improvement of technologies for producing novel materials and methods for their protection are a vital prerequisite in solving the problem of ensuring the reliability and high efficiency of stationary and vehicular power plants, as well as in creating new-generation engines.

It's grammatically OK, but it will exhaust the reader.

This one will, too:
Development and improvement of technologies for producing novel materials and methods for their protection are vital prerequisites when solving problems of ensuring reliability and high efficiency of stationary or vehicular power plants, as well as creating new-generation engines.
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