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Old 26-Mar-2008, 06:40
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Unhappy Correct my story please....

Dear teachers, although I am not a professional teachers, I teach some children at my home and I have taught them "sh" and "ch" sounds recently. Now I have written a story to reinforce the concept. Could you please check my story. Please do make corrections if there are.
"Once upon a time there was cheeky chick. The chick bought a chair. The chair was not expensive. It was cheap. He pushed the chair home. A cat saw him with the new chair. She soon built a wish to enjoy sitting on it. She chased after the chick. The chick got into the house and banged the door shut. It was very dark inside but the cat had sharp eyes. She cheerfully waited for the chick to sleep. When suddenly she heard some shouts from outside. It was a dog. She got scared and shrank behind the cupboard. She hit her shin with the cupboard
and shrieked loudly. This captured the dog's attention and she had to flee way leaving her wish
unfulfilled."
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