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Old 27-Mar-2008, 04:42
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Exclamation Re: Please check my paragraph writing

thank you for your reply

1.
sir i replace as per your given idea

how universities are developing


2.
sir if i replace

Two important factors are the development of this application.

with

Two underlying factors led to the development of this application

what your suggestion

3.

'reports to University management'

Sir which article I use here
can you give me idea
write any sample please

thank you





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