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Old 27-Mar-2008, 05:46
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Default Re: Correct mistakes in passage

Today, my teacher told me to write a diary.
**So I need to use english to write this article.**
**But no important things are needed to write down.**

… **Person A got better marks in biology test than me. I am very happy because he is getting

more

hardworking…**

My SUGGESTION:
Today my teacher told me to write a diary.
I must use English words to write this article.
However, there are no important things to write down.

Another person receive a better score in biology test better than me. I am so proud of him, because the test results showed his hardworks.
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