Thread: Pls Pls Pls can you correct my paragraph?????????Many thanks.....
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Old 27-Mar-2008, 18:55
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Default Re: Pls Pls Pls can you correct my paragraph?????????Many thanks.....
You have right!

The second paragraph isn't really comprehensible!But in the reality I don't know what I can write better.Would you like to give me some suggestions about it?

I really thank you for your correction!
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