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Old 28-Mar-2008, 18:34
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Default Re: pleas check my paragraph

Amola - this was not written well

Did you proof read your work?
Did you read every sentence and make sure the subject and verb agreed?
There were many spelling mistakes, too.

Here are your sentences corrrected gramatically.
Try to slow down and do a better job, next time


Everyone has a personality which makes him different from other persons. Daily living is the main part of establishing this personality. Each person expresses sides of his personality by dealing with other people.There are several adjectives which can make up a person's personality and everyone knows them: shy, stubborn,ambitious,talkative,hard-working, etc. In sum, your behavior reflects your personality, even to those you don't know. So be wise and be careful.
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