29-Mar-2008, 07:50
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 Re: pleas check my paragraph
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Originally Posted by susiedqq  Amola - this was not written well 
Did you proof read your work? 
Did you read every sentence and make sure the subject and verb agreed?
There were many spelling mistakes, too.
Here are your sentences corrrected gramatically.
Try to slow down and do a better job, next time Everyone has a personality which makes him different from other persons. Daily living is the main part of establishing this personality. Each person expresses sides of his personality by dealing with other people.There are several adjectives which can make up a person's personality and everyone knows them: shy, stubborn,ambitious,talkative,hard-working, etc. In sum, your behavior reflects your personality, even to those you don't know. So be wise and be careful. | Thanks alot
I know that my paragraph is not that good but i will keep trying.Thank you for your help and i'll do my best next time.Although i'm facing a big problem with grammar but i'll try.
amola |