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Old 29-Mar-2008, 15:53
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Default Re: Correct my email messgae please

I am not a teacher, but here is my suggested message:

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Dear Friend

Firstly, let me introduce myself, I am S.Thirumurthi. I am the Managing Trustee for Foundation for Disabled trust, registred at Coimbatore (Registered No 1334/2007) in Tamil Nadu. We run a fund raising program for development of our trust activities and conduct various social services. We have introduced a Binary program for the Development of the trust. It’s a program started 3 months back and now has more than 500 members. The entry amount is Rs.600/- paid once. To the Donors we issue Personal Accident policy (worth Rs.1,00,000) from The New India Assurance Company Limited.


We compliment bonus rates at Rs. 200/- per pair, with daily ceiling of 5 pairs and maximum earning oppportunity of Rs.1000/- per day.

We will arrange a ground floor for you, if you come and visit our company in person. We will also load you, your friends, and all those who are willing to join our program with a credit entry. It is a wonderful chance to earn Rs.1000/day, Rs.7000/week and Rs.30,000/month. Visit out website for full details.

Onsite you would be to register your down-line members, using the pin-number issued by me. If you are interested to join, reply as soon as possible. If you are the first member in your area/district/state, you can achieve your aim and earning target very easily.


For any clarifications, feel free to write me



A Thanks With kind regards
S.Thirumurthi
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