Hi Ronbee,
Thank you so much for correct it to me.
So, I will write it again and saw my mistakes.
You said that was not clear enough for you to be able to make any suggestions. So, I would like to write that sentences;
''One day, a good looking valiant man died near the bridge and while he was die, Dumrul saw him and Angel of Death. After that he beard Angel of Death and God, but God angry his beard.''
Only, I tried it for be more clear.
Of course, I still don't know it was correct or false.
