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Old 30-Mar-2008, 16:13
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Default Re: Please correct my sentence
I am not a teacher, but here is my suggestion:
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We wish to change the quantity of CK9902 for DM shipment. Add 6 more pcs to make the total 4006 pcs. Please complete the order by original schedule of Apr 15th and find the details of order allocation below.
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