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Old 30-Mar-2008, 18:36
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Default Re: Please correct me

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Originally Posted by Zoe2008 View Post
Hi Imanuragjain,

Thank you for your help. I correct some from your text in blue below, please review it agian and correct me if there have any incorrect. Thanks

We are still receiving the stained equipments. The grease is stained to the boxes and shipped to our customer in USA. We have been reprimanded for this fault at several times in the past; also with the penalty and ship them the new boxes. I am quite surprised by reputation of such instance at your end. I would request you to kindly look into this and suggest or take actions to avoid such thing from happening again in future. Your prompt reply on the above would be appreciated.

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Zoe
We are still receiving the stained equipments. The grease is stained on the boxes and shipped to our customer in USA. We have been penalised for this fault several times in the past; with penalty fees and shipment of new boxes. I am quite surprised by repetition of such instances at your end. I would request you to kindly look into this and suggest or take actions to avoid such things from happening again in future. Your prompt reply on the above would be appreciated.

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1) "Stained `on' the boxes and not `to' the boxes
2) `penalised' fits better then reprimanded
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