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Old 31-Mar-2008, 06:51
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Default Please corect my sentences

This is a short story. please the correct the sentences

This morning Lisa Miller was lucky when she was late and missed her bus.
Lisa sent a job application to A.C. company last month. They invited her for a job interview this morning at 11 am o'clock. when she was leaving of her hom, she remembered , she had left to take her purse.she had to go back. as she was hurrying to be on time she missed her bus. the bus had a serious accident in 15th st. and all the bus passaners died.
she stay alive becauseshe was 5 minutes late and missed her bus.
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