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Re: Please corect my sentences Quote:
Originally Posted by mahboobeh This is a short story. Please correct the sentences.
This morning Lisa Miller was lucky when she was late and missed her bus.
Lisa sent a job application to [applied for a job with] A.C. company last month. They invited her for a job interview this morning at 11 am o'clock.[11.00 o'clock.] when she was leaving of her hom [As she left home/When she left home], she remembered she had left to take her purse.[forgotten her purse/left her purse behind/forgotten to take her purse]. She had to go back. as she was hurrying to be on time and so she missed her bus. The bus had a serious accident in 15th Street. and all the bus passengers died. she stay alive becauseshe She is alive because she was 5 minutes late and missed her bus. | . |