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Originally Posted by Anglika Back and forth is fine in this, but Narrative plait is not. The narrative constantly [goes/jumps/leaps] back and forth.... |
Sorry, my fault. What I wanted to say is not "story" or " narrative" but "narrative plait", that's to say the interwoven elements making up a story. Can not be said the sentence in this sense with back and forth, then?
Thank You and excuse me, again

