[ripley]

Hi! Could you help me. I'd like to improve my grammar and style. Tanks.



My English teacher is really a booby:she gave us a test on conditionals and she told us that all the sentences required the third conditional and so that practically all the sentences had the same structure.I hope that I’ll get a good mark!!!
During our school assembly some of my friends and I decided to escape from school in order to go in the hills and chop down a dying tree.You should have seen the ivy that twisted it. It was enormous and it took us an hour to cut it.
A question arises spontaneously . Was it really necessary?