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Old 03-Apr-2008, 13:31
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Please correct the following passage for me if there are errors.
"Keeping in mind the cultural values and philosophy of education, the compatibility of the new generation with the current education systems and the ever expanding challenges of today's education, this series of "Young Artist" has specially been designed for the children of today in such a way that they feel more attraction towards Arts.
The series of "Young Artist" prepare today's children to compete the latest trends and to acquire latest technological awareness so that their mentality levels about designing increase and their concepts of colours and creativity also develop.Students thus evolved are more intelligent and beneficial than those who do not have a creativity touch and concept of them."
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