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Old 08-Apr-2008, 21:23
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Dear people
Here is my new poem, would you please proofread it.

Why


Why a young woman at the bus stop cries?

Love,

Illness,

A lost mobile phone?

If we were in another country

I would wipe her tears with my parched lips.

Here, I do not dare.

My hair is dark

Her strawberry blond.

My eyes the plough earth

Hers the blue sky.

The sun is shining

The economy blooming

But she is still crying

And I do not dare to kiss her cheeks.
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