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Re: Belonging Quote:
Originally Posted by Bassim Please, would you proofread my poem.
Belonging
Late in the night I use to open my bedroom window,
letting the cold Swedish winter come in. letting in the cold Swedish winter
All my neighbours were sleeping,
hard working people and old pensioners,
spending their last years on this forlorn planet.
Tomorrow, they will rush to their jobs
and walk their dogs.
They are part of this world.
They know what they are doing.
As for me, I belong nowhere.
I am like this cold wind, entering for a short while
and, in the next moment,
trembling over silver birches outside. |  |