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Old 13-Apr-2008, 15:41
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The Poem

On cold and dreary winter days,

far away from my home,

when my soul suffers most,

my mind moves back in time,

like in self-defence.

I am in a bright room with a window wide open.

A light breeze

wafts the scent of jasmine inside.


Trees bulge with ripe fruit.

A crow steals a walnut.

In the distance a sound of a passing train.

the wind brings merry voices

from a school playground.

Let me stay here for a while.

I do hope you won't kill me for the changed lines
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