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Old 16-Apr-2008, 13:14
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Unhappy Could you help me this short essay? (recount)

Hi everyone, i have never recounted because i do not know how to

write a recount? so i try to recount about Jack Rocco

Could you help me correct or modify it...Thank so much

He was born in Toronto, Canada in 1890. However, his parents come
from Italy. His parents had a jazz cafe so he keen on about music during
his childhood. At the age of 10, he began collecting records and he crazy
about jazz, rock and blues. In 1995, he helped his family out at family
cafe.

At that time he met local musicians and performers.
When he was 18 years old, he left school and he opened the CD shop
above parent’s cafe and he joined band ‘The Blues Boys’. Two years
later, he borrowed money from parents for opened the second CD shop in
down town Toronto. Several months, ‘The Blues Boys’ recorded their first
CD at home studio and they distributed through the Internet.

In 2002, he had a lot of experience about record and manager in show
business, so he established band management company JH Music and
recording studio in Toronto with younger sister and business partner
Jane. In 2003, independent record label JHM. Over the following three
years, he opened new branches of JH Music stores in Ottawa, Montreal
and Edmonton in Toronto.

He won a prize ‘Young Entrepreneur of the Year’ in 2006 after that he
opened the JH music stores in Los Angeles, California. At the moment,
his plan to focus on management of new Canadian bands and he is going
to expand of JHM record label to include international acts form the USA
and Europe
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