Re: The Resurrection, Part two Bassim
You are very kind . . . I enjoy reading your articles.
It is not difficult for me to replace your words, with perhaps, a more appropriate word . . . it is easy for me as I am English.
You have a superb command of the English language and I feel, at times, a little heavy-handed in making so many small adjustments to your narratives . . . they are well written, interesting, amusing and tender. - Thank you for sharing them.
As for IKEA and the sausages . . . now I understand . . . do you know I have never been to IKEA, although there are plenty of stores here . . however, in the narrative it does not explain it very well and to have furniture and sausages side-by-side seemed rather bizarre!
Best wishes for a nice day!
Last edited by Svaneska; 17-Apr-2008 at 16:31.
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