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Old 22-Apr-2008, 12:29
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Default Re: Is this sentence correct?

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Originally Posted by David L. View Post
"With all due respect, and if I may be so bold,

I would like to make it known : this sounds like a public announcement, whereas I think the intention is 'to bring to your private attention'

I would like to bring to your attention a confidential communication written to (name)..."
Ok thanks!, that makes sense, but I'm still wondering about whether this part is written correctly: "known to a confidential communication written to..."
Is it correct to write it that way? it just doesn't sound right to me. I know now that 'to bring to your private attention' works better in this sentence but I want to know if the underlined part is correct or incorrect, I'm just curious because my brother insists that it is but I just don't see how it could be. What do you guys think?
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