[Maluues]

Hey Anglika.
Thanks for your correction.
We haven't learned where to use punctation yet.
Whenever there is a letter missing it is the fault of my keyboard :).

Firstly we should examine Willy’s way of life who is like I have already mentioned a person who is marked by the philosophy of the “American Dream” which says that a person who works hard will earn great success ignoring important circumstances.

Do you have any ideas how I could re-write this sentence?
If I seperate this sentence my language will suffer under this because I have no idea of how to connect the emerging parts.

Greetings Maluues