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Old 02-May-2008, 10:48
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Default Please help me with my essay (contrast and comparison)

hi everyone ,,

this is my essay ( about Comparison and contrast )i have to submit it soon ,,

i need a grammer check on it ,, and ideas ,

i iss one similaritie between bahrain and japan

do my comparin is good !! or need changes what about my Conclusion !?

this is my topic



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Bahrain and Japan


Bahrain is totally different from Japan, they are the two most extremely different Countries and that we can find all over the world. In fact this is not the truth, because many comparisons and contrasts we can find between Bahrain and Japan. There are three main similarities as well as three main differences among these two countries.

Bahrain and Japan share many similarities and there are main three we can see them easily. Firstly, Bahrain and Japan both are an archipelago consist of many islands. Bahrain local food are come from the sea such fish and prawn, also Japan most of their food such are come from sea.

There are three main differences we can find between Bahrain and Japan. Bahrain is very small islands, whereas Japan islands are big. The major difference is the language which is totally different, Bahrain language is Arabic which is spoke in many other countries but Japan language is Japanese and are spoke only in Japan. The last differences is that Bahrain is kingdom, Constitutional monarchy and govern by the king through a hereditary system ; although Japan is an Constitutional monarchy that have an emperor as a state symbol ,however, the emperor has not real power and operate under the constitution which are headed by the Prime Minister of Japan who has the real power.

Comparing between Bahrain and Japan can results similarities in geographic, food, but it results many differences in language, and the governance. These similarities and differences play major role in defining the relationship between these countries. Differences can be avoided in many ways, so both countries can be culturally merge.
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