[MartinMATOMartin]

hi amona86,
I modified your essay a bit and a truly hope that it'll help you
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Bahrain is totally different from Japan. They are the two most different countries that can be found all over the world. In fact this is not true, because both differences and similarities can be found between Bahrain and Japan. There are three main similarities as well as three main differences among these two countries.

Bahrain and Japan share many similarities. Three of them can be spotted easily. Firstly, Bahrain and Japan are both an archipelago consisted of many islands. Bahrain local food comes from the sea such as fish and prawn and the most of Japan’s food comes from the sea, too.

There are three main differences we can find between Bahrain and Japan. Bahrain is very Small Island, whereas Japan islands are big. The major difference is the language which is totally different; Bahrain language is Arabic which is spoken in many other countries but Japan’s language is spoken only in Japan. The last differences is that Bahrain is kingdom, a constitutional monarchy that is governed by the king through a hereditary system; although Japan is a constitutional monarchy that has an emperor as a state symbol, however the emperor has not real power and operates under the constitution which is headed by the Prime Minister of Japan who has the real power.

Comparing Bahrain and Japan can result in geographical similarities, similarities in food, but also it results with differences in the language, and the governance. These similarities and differences play major role in defining the relationship between these countries. Differences can be avoided in many ways, so both countries can be culturally merged.


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So, if you have anything to complain about or make some objection, please do.
Martin