
02-May-2008, 21:58
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My short story Hello, This is my first story can anyone correct it please Towards the end of September at ten O'clock in the morning I met a man by accident and maybe it was the destiny that gathered us again. When our eyes have met, I lost myself. "Who is that man?" I thought. Quick scenes of wonderful time crossed my mind and sailed me to the time when I smiled, laughed and shared the happiest moments. He walked close to me I heard his sweet voice through my ears "Did we meet before?" What a lovely voice he had! His facial expressions were wonderful and his bright eyes were so wistful. "Maybe" I said "Sure we did I feel that I know you" I felt the same too. I felt there wasn't only a meeting, but a great bond we shared together. I thought I know this good-looking face and that I touched it one day. He held my hands "We were lovers" he said. The touch of his hand was the same as I have always felt. I remembered him. "Yes, you were, and still, my love" I said "I am eager to hear it again" he said I smiled "I love you" Then he hugged me. His warm chest was always my head rest. Nothing interrupted this long romantic hug except a voice was calling "grandma, grandma…" "This is my granddaughter I take her to walk everyday" I smiled "It was a long time and I am grandma now" "I am a grandpa too but my love for you is still young" I bid farewell to him. When the sun sat down, we were continuing our separated lives.
Last edited by Over the top; 12-May-2008 at 18:50.
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