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Originally Posted by wuwei  Hi, teachers, pls help to correct the essay with some key words required in the English book what I am learning by myself. I am also unable to understand the highlighted word---on----in the phrase what the book given, |
Please restate that.
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Originally Posted by wuwei After walking around the ancienty city, the archaeologists spotted a temple dating from the fifteenth century B.C. and then decided to explore this temple. |
That's okay, but "the temple" would be better.
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Originally Posted by wuwei As the explore progressing, archarologists found a sacred room of this temple, on entering the sacred room, the archaeologists saw some fragments of some statues on the ground, after this, workman began digging and soon discovered a body of one statue. |
Rewrite that as three sentences.
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Originally Posted by wuwei The archaeologists reconstructed the fragments carefully, they were astonished to find that it was the goddess, the goddess stood three feet high and rested her hands on her hips, she was wearing a full-length skirt which swept the floor, despite her great age, she is graceful. |
Rewrite that as four sentences.
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Originally Posted by wuwei Although the archaeologists looked up some Bibles, they were unable to find out her name. |
Rewrite that so it makes sense.
