10-May-2008, 07:23
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| Newbie | | Join Date: Apr 2007 Country: Australia
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Current Location: Australia First Language: Cantonese Member Type: Student or Learner Thanks: 4
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 Re: admission ESSAY
Dear sender:
I don't think this letter would help you to get into a high reputation school! That's because:
1) This is an essay and you should have included your findings about the school
2) You should write down why is your ambition important to that school
3) You should give them evidences on what are good student you are! School principal's comment would be higher recommended to be put in!
4) Don't put so much your comment about what you are going to do (Write down what you've known about the school and try to write down what a wonderful school it is ~~Do NOT write "I think" ~~ You need to let them know that you are certain)
I hope these comments are useful!
Quintin |