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Originally Posted by Zoe2008  Hi Neillythere, Can you take a look for my revision: = Can you take a look at my revised wording. appreciate your further information; and advised / told Christine call me this information / news Is this sentence work ? Thanks to advise = Thanks for your advice. Have a nice weekend  Regards Zoe |
Hi Zoe
That is much better. Use
advised Christine to call me. ( told is more if Christine made a mistake originally )
Thank you veru much for Stilo, Apex & Neilythere, ardent to help me. I also appreciate for all of you ! = Thank you very much to ......... for helping me. I appreciate all of you!
It is a pleasure Zoe, as you are appreciative and genuinely ask/need our help to improve your English.
Take care
Regards Stilo