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Old 11-May-2008, 16:18
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Default Re: Please correct my admission essay!
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Originally Posted by vv0510_vn View Post
Above all, the most important reason why I chose TCHS is because of its well-trained and enthusiastic teachers and faculty.
"Teachers" and "faculty" are the same thing.

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