Hi, I am Sylvia. I am trying to find some feedback about my writing skills.
I have written a short essay similar to those asked in common admission tests for college or certain certifications. All I want is to have some feedback to see how can I improve, or what should I correct.

Thank you :D



Going to school to another country is a great experience, but it is not for everyone.
Having the opportunity to study at a foreign country has innumerable good points as the experience of living an unnative culture, the opportunity to learn or master a foreign language, new perspective of the native country from outside and all the fascinating people that can be met.
As every experience it also has its hard side, because when somebody goes through the challenge of learning and living at a foreign country that person might face lack of confidence when trying to find a roll in a new culture, or obtain low results at school due to the difficulty of new language and trouble with adaptation process.
Going to school is no for any person, but certainly for someone who has the potential and strength to overcome obstacles, that can be found, studying in a foreign country is a fascinating experience that should not be given away.