Hm. There are some interesting problems here. Let's begin. :)
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Originally Posted by Latoof
“I will go to the library, but I won’t be late. Ok, see you later” said Latifa to her friend Reem.
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Unfortunately, it is not clear what the connection is between going to the library and being late.
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Originally Posted by Latoof Latifa thin, tall, nineteen years old girl. |
You need to make that a sentence. Perhaps:
- Latifa was a thin, tall, nineteen-year-old girl.
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Originally Posted by Latoof Latifa is studying English Language and Literature major in the university. Reem is her best friend. |
That first sentence doesn't quite make it. Perhaps:
- Latifah is studying English at the university. Her major is English Literature.
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Originally Posted by Latoof They are together since the beginning of their study as English major students. |
You need to decide that tense you want the narrative to be in--past or present? If it's past tense, say:
- They had been together since the beginning of their studies as English majors.
If it's present tense, say:
- They have been together since the beginning of their studies as English majors.
It will take me a while to finish.
:)