Thread: [Grammar] Need your correction
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Old 02-Jul-2008, 15:45
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Default Re: Need your correction

I'm unsure of your exact intended meaning for part of this. I provided both possible interpretations. I hope this helps.

As per Tom’s instruction, we must conduct the pre-inspection for HJ789 and JI679 before SGS inspection so the factory does not provide the incorrect lot number which will cause the customer to complain again. Tom is concerned the factory location is far away, and suggests our QC stay in Shenzhen in order not to waste traffic time. Grace will send you the whole schedule for your easy planning, please help arrange it with her. Thank you.



...so the factory does not provide the incorrect lot number which will caused the customer to complain in the first place.
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