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Re: 8> Could you find and correct any mistakes in the paragraph(life in university) Quote:
Originally Posted by dodonaomik There is a hill, named Tigher hill , in my university. | Now I get it. Perhaps: There is a hill named Tigher Hill on the campus of the university. Quote:
Originally Posted by dodonaomik And the hill is very common, but I felt it was lovely . | There is nothing special about the hill, but to me it is lovely. Quote:
Originally Posted by dodonaomik
Ever I went it up many times to recite English like a celestial being or a hermit , and at the same time I slowly forgot the uproar | I have gone up the hill many times to recite English like a celestial being or a hermit, and at the same time I slowly forgot the uproar. That is a rather odd sentence, but at the same time it is rather poetic.
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