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Old 13-Jul-2008, 14:54
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Default Re: 8> Could you find and correct any mistakes in the paragraph(life in university)

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There is a hill, named Tigher hill , in my university.

Now I get it. Perhaps:
There is a hill named Tigher Hill on the campus of the university.

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And the hill is very common, but I felt it was lovely .
There is nothing special about the hill, but to me it is lovely.
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Ever I went it up many times to recite English like a celestial being or a hermit , and at the same time I slowly forgot the uproar
I have gone up the hill many times to recite English like a celestial being or a hermit, and at the same time I slowly forgot the uproar.
That is a rather odd sentence, but at the same time it is rather poetic.

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