there is so much thanks i wanna say to u. when i after reading ur changes i get some good suggestions. like i just thought mizzle is drizzle, and falling down piece by piece is drop by drop. cool. :D

here cantus i mean a nice rhythm of song , so how do i express?

and She always raises her head holding her hands (how do you raise your head holding your hands, i mean the girl in a gesture , which her head is looking at the sky so her head should be looking up but what word would be right one? and meanwhile her hands is holding together like praying . so may here is a wrong expressing , but i think u can understand what i wanna show now , right ? :D hope so ...

thank u so much :D