If I want to apply a position of the Human Resource Department of the siemens company. I don't know whether my resume and cover letter is appropriate.
please give me some professional guidance, thank you! :D
cover letter
Dear Sir
With the application to the assistant position.
I am the graduate of the Shanghai University, I am interested in applying for the assistant position in the Human Resource Department.
Once I was an assistant of the manager of the Human Resource Department, so I have some experience on this position. At the same time the study in my university gave me some support to this position.
I think I am a studious staff, I will try my best to finish my task. I am also good at the teamwork, so I feel I will be suitable to this position. On the other hand, I like your company very much indeed, it is an effective, innovated and harmonious company. If I can become your staff, I am sure I will be successful.
I am looking forward to hearing from you.
Yours faithfully
Athena
resume
Yan Zhao
Room 501, Deyuan Road NO.16,
Nanxiang, Jiading, Shanghai, China, 201800
HT:59000000 MT: 13800000000
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Summary of Qualification
Computer literate: Microsoft Office, Flash, Internet Search
Native Chinese speaker fluent in English, passed CET 6
Successful team leader
Japanese beginner
Relevant Course Work
Organizational Behavior: Management, Motivation and Organization skills Commerce Communication: Communication skills
Commerce English: English in a business environment
Education
Sydney Institute of Language and Commerce (SILC) Shanghai University Shanghai, China
Diploma of Shanghai University in International trade July, 2003
Bachelor Degree in International Economics and Trade July, 2005
Received scholarships in 2001, 2002 and 2004
Xinli College Shanghai, China
Customs Courses commenced April, 2004
Experience
Huaxin Wire and Cable Limited Company Shanghai, China
Secretary of the Human Resource Department from June to August, 2002
Assisted the manager, dealt with the materials, typed the documents
Tutor Taught a Japanese manager Chinese and English from February to august, 2003
Taught a girl English from September to December, 2003
Teaching a boy English, Chinese and Math since January, 2004