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Old 23-Oct-2004, 14:47
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t is the reputation and growth of your company attracts my great interests.

This sentence is not grammatically correct- you should say
t is the reputation and growth of your company WHICH attracts my great interest.

However, even than, I'm not sure that the sentence works- it sounds a bit to much like flattery.
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