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Old 23-Oct-2004, 15:06
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My name is Simon. I am from Shanghai.

These sentences are very short and unlikelyto get someone to give youa job. I don't see the need for this information. I can read your name at the end of the letter and work out where youlive fromyour resume. You should start by telling me why you are writing to me.
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