Thread: mini book report needs to be edit please
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Old 26-Oct-2004, 10:42
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he was able to create a masterpiece that engages the reader to have a sense of what it felt like living in turmoil

This doesn'twork because of 'engage.... to have':

that engages the reader by giving them a sense of what ....
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