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Old 19-Jan-2005, 21:44
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Originally Posted by Dany
Hello Flash,

I try to make the beginning, but I'm not sure, if I do everything well


A fast number of goods are being criticized because they are being diffucult to handle these days.


In spite of the fact that the Professor had given her a lot of difficult tasks she handled it well.


Peter will handle her preparation for the coming exam.


The terrible storm had reduced a huge number of biuldings into rubble.


It is very curious that only 14-year-old girls are allowed to go in.


Kind regards,
Dany
1. I'll make a start, but I am not sure if I will get everything just right.
2. The original is okay.
3. Even though the professor gave her a lot of difficult tasks, she handled it well.
4. That is good.
5. The terrible storm reduced a large number of buildings to rubble.
6. I would prefer "odd" to "curious" there. Thus, I would say:
It is very odd that ony 14-year-old girls are allowed to go in.

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